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Colour and text test by ~Eloqui:iconEloqui:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Macabre & Horror

©2007-2009 ~Eloqui
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well... yeah what that says.
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=BloodiRose Jul 3, 2007, 2:52:13 AM
Wow, I love your stile. Its all pretty like 8D Yesh, I will fav beacouse I can and I like it and thats all I have to say O.O

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-Want some cyanide with that cupcake?-
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~Eloqui Jul 3, 2007, 2:55:39 AM
Nya thanks! Really, it means a lot to me when people say stuff like that ^-^

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The Elly Comics! Check it out... hell you might even like it ^-^
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=BloodiRose Jul 3, 2007, 3:05:57 AM
Yesh, I....Thinking about web comics I have a few I need to check up on. I wonder how much the peoples have done since last time I checked up.

Anyway, yes I do ^_^;

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-Want some cyanide with that cupcake?-
:cookie::tea:
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~Lucky-kuro-neko Jul 3, 2007, 8:50:07 PM
'Lo eloqui. I think your style has really improved heaps .
Since you are asking for critique, I would say stick to white in the background of a text box or speech bubble and make the borders of them thinner.
But i'm not by any way making rules on it.. I'm not a comic expert! but I do read them a lot ^-^ and use spellcheck!

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...Vivid rainbow shards are bleeding from my eyes...
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~Eloqui Jul 3, 2007, 9:16:57 PM
Thank and please, just call me Elly ^-^
I tried using the opaqued text boxes because it's always just so painful cutting away at bits of pictures I've worked so hard on. Really! It kills me to just think about it.
Jeah smaller borders would be a good idea... I'm working out a border size to text size ratio. This is about 3.5 to 1... I think I'll go for 2 to 1 next time.
Oh and speaking of comics, I'm ordering in one I think you'll like. It's not Japanese but that doesn't really matter dose it?

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The Elly Comics! Check it out... hell you might even like it ^-^
[link]
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~HeLPleSSPhreak Jul 4, 2007, 3:49:56 PM
I think, your style is uniqe and well suited to web comix :D Keep up the nice work *Elly*

Like what lucky said, stick to the white backrounds for text bubbles, and make the borders a bit thinner.

*Faved*

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Leaning in, she turned away. "No, I can't. I'm Sorry."
*PLZ I NEED CRITISIZM!!*
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~Eloqui Jul 4, 2007, 8:12:07 PM
Thanks your too kind ^-^.
And your right, the text boxes are really quite dodgy...

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The Elly Comics! Check it out... hell you might even like it ^-^
[link]
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~HeLPleSSPhreak Jul 7, 2007, 2:09:54 AM
Can U post a v of this without the textboxes and stuff? So I can put it as my backround?

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Leaning in, she turned away. "No, I can't. I'm Sorry."
*PLZ I NEED CRITISIZM!!*
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~Eloqui Jul 7, 2007, 7:58:25 AM
Oh my! *blush*
Shucks, I'm really quite flattered... But wouldn't you rather something that wasn't thrown together from three or four pieces of scrap paper in two minuets with photoshop?
Well I'd be honored to do it of course (if a little perplexed).

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The Elly Comics! Check it out... hell you might even like it ^-^
[link]
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